a trailer is suppost to warm people to the fact that something great is coming, making them add u as favorites so they don't miss it.
this trailer doesn't do that, it just shows two stick figures standing, being badly drawn, not even a clue about a castle.
so here are a few tips.
- add awesome graphics in your trailer and let that be at least the minimum quality the full picture contains.
- add actionpacked animation of good quality that leaves the watcher craving for more.
- vind a voice-actor with a mature/sexy voice to do the talking.
- get a better microphone, because it was maybe the music but heard "thunder" on the background.
- add a hint of story to your trailer.
hope this helps
the filesize had me woried but it was very good :)
keep up the good work
U have already submitted this video, i don't see the difirence, at least the other one had a preloader, it was playable, just a litle hard to press play, no reason to resubmit it, or u should have waited for it to get trough and then adjusted it... as u can clearly read after it coming trough u will see that i offered my help to fix the preloader,
a bit disapointing
I added u as favorite when i saw the trailer of this, and that part still is the best of the movie
i didn't really like the robot thingy, i wish it would be more like the trailer part,
still it was a good movie, great animation, but i didn't like the plot.
hopefully u'll make some other nice movie where he plays more of a super hero.
most of the time these movies are funny,
there is only one thing that's a little enoying, when u go to the next page and watch a movie it goes back to the first page afther the movie, if i'm not mistaking it shouldn't be much work to make it go back to the 2nd page,
i hope this helps
the concept and idea and stuff is good,
but u should make him do more, and stuff, not just well stand there :p
mmm, well some made me laugh some were not so good, i expected more, but it still good.
i liked the song but i think it was a bit to loud and to fast pasted for some of the animations, it didn't really fit.
next to that in the one animation that interupted the music had its sound out of sinc i think because well he started screaming before he burned.
Thanks.. Yes, I'll fix the audio on that part.
not to bad
not the greatest but it was decent.
only thing that bugged me were teh flying bullets, they were to big some times and they flew kinda always the same fluctuating up and down not the best way.
i've seen movies use stripes as bullets and that seems to work pretty well, it is easy to make a stripe shoot of sparks when hitting something so :) that might be a improvemnt for your next one :)
jep :) even idiots can animate.
i think it looks pretty decent.
have seen far worse then this so :)
ur sentence about the copiing graphics is kinda confusing but well,
maybe u should make your own simple graphics.
next to that there is one weird thing, when the movie starts it blinks before starting (doesn't happen when replaying) so it might be a exces frame that's in the wrong place, or a failed preloader? don't know but there is something there, and it needs fixing :)
hope this helped
not so great
arts are crappy and i don't know what the hell is going on... randomness was good though.
here some tips:
use better graphics,
use a distinctive storyline
use a background
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