black-raven's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Nutcracker Trailer]

wow

now that's a trailer :)
the game looks fantastic to play :)

[end it all]

cool

nicely done :)
i like explosm :) how much do u like noodles :)

but this movie was great :p the art was a fantastic style :) and the breadtoaster that speaks :p great, the electrocution scene was pretty nice, felt real :)

good job

[Raccoon Christmas]

mmm

nice try but could of bein better,
i never seen a guy standing with a knife in his chest just saying that he is dieing, and that is a dangerous window, it has more force then a bomb, seeing that the raccoon was in one piece after the explosion but gets sliced in half by a freaking window. unless u have razorblade windows u can break your hips on a a falling window but that's about it, so here are some pointers:
make realistic script and animation, try to add some more sound effects , maybe a happy christmas background song? euhm art was pretty good in my eyes,

YellowRaccoon responds:

it did have background music, and it's not a realistic video, I know that a window won't chop raccoons in half

[Requiem for the Damned]

mmm

mmm did u upload the wrong file?

seeing the title the icon and the comment i was expecting something great but well i didn't, i didn't have a clue what it was about,
so much for expectations,
here are some tips:
use animation,
collor,
backgrounds
story,

[Bully]

cool

nice, i'm also doing a movie on bullying :)
it all looked pretty good, i didn't realy have any problems with anything so well done :)

[Operation Armageddon Tsr]

ok :)

now this is what i call a teaser, at first i was thinking mmm another blam, until i saw the movie :p it can stand on its own and that is what a teaser needs to do :)
i realy liked it the semi-3d art and the action, nicely done :)
the red guy had something weird in his face, don't know if it is ment to be but if it isn't then maybe u should fix it

can't wait to see the rest :)

RockLou responds:

=D Thanks. The wierd stuff inthe face will be removed, that was a minor... error.

[Sinns' EpiC]

mmm

i don't realy get the title i have seen more epic stuff,
and for something to be epic doesn't it need a story? or maybe i misunderstand the meaning of epic, anyways about the movie,
kinda short, a bit u boring, needed more action, the music was good but i listen to heavy metal so...
i think it needs work, animation can be better but isn't bad, the art can be much better, and the story should be more obvious.

hope this helps
goodluck