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[Nutcracker Trailer]

wow

now that's a trailer :)
the game looks fantastic to play :)

[end it all]

cool

nicely done :)
i like explosm :) how much do u like noodles :)

but this movie was great :p the art was a fantastic style :) and the breadtoaster that speaks :p great, the electrocution scene was pretty nice, felt real :)

good job

[Unreel Unfin]

doesn't tease

i didn't feel very excited to see the finished version, so it didn't tease,
the voice was not understandeble, so that needs improvement.
the art was good, nothing special but it looked nice,
i didn't understand what was going on so i don't know what the movie is going to go about (except a city called reel) , so i think u need to explain more,
i hope the movie is better then this :)

good luck

[Raccoon Christmas]

mmm

nice try but could of bein better,
i never seen a guy standing with a knife in his chest just saying that he is dieing, and that is a dangerous window, it has more force then a bomb, seeing that the raccoon was in one piece after the explosion but gets sliced in half by a freaking window. unless u have razorblade windows u can break your hips on a a falling window but that's about it, so here are some pointers:
make realistic script and animation, try to add some more sound effects , maybe a happy christmas background song? euhm art was pretty good in my eyes,

YellowRaccoon responds:

it did have background music, and it's not a realistic video, I know that a window won't chop raccoons in half

[Requiem for the Damned]

mmm

mmm did u upload the wrong file?

seeing the title the icon and the comment i was expecting something great but well i didn't, i didn't have a clue what it was about,
so much for expectations,
here are some tips:
use animation,
collor,
backgrounds
story,

[Trailer - The Jabberwocky]

woow

that looks realy promising :)
i like the voice that talks :) sounds like the real deal
can't wait to see it :)

[Bully]

cool

nice, i'm also doing a movie on bullying :)
it all looked pretty good, i didn't realy have any problems with anything so well done :)

[Operation Armageddon Tsr]

ok :)

now this is what i call a teaser, at first i was thinking mmm another blam, until i saw the movie :p it can stand on its own and that is what a teaser needs to do :)
i realy liked it the semi-3d art and the action, nicely done :)
the red guy had something weird in his face, don't know if it is ment to be but if it isn't then maybe u should fix it

can't wait to see the rest :)

RockLou responds:

=D Thanks. The wierd stuff inthe face will be removed, that was a minor... error.

[A Very Madness Christmas]

haha

the only thing that bothers me is the voice "acting",
i think u should have used subtitles or real voices.

[Sinns' EpiC]

mmm

i don't realy get the title i have seen more epic stuff,
and for something to be epic doesn't it need a story? or maybe i misunderstand the meaning of epic, anyways about the movie,
kinda short, a bit u boring, needed more action, the music was good but i listen to heavy metal so...
i think it needs work, animation can be better but isn't bad, the art can be much better, and the story should be more obvious.

hope this helps
goodluck