black-raven's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[DBZ Goku Vs Vegeta works]

mmmm

U have already submitted this video, i don't see the difirence, at least the other one had a preloader, it was playable, just a litle hard to press play, no reason to resubmit it, or u should have waited for it to get trough and then adjusted it... as u can clearly read after it coming trough u will see that i offered my help to fix the preloader,

wjimmyw responds:

really now..

[Raining Ash Trailer]

mmm

nothing new was added from the last version i saw but the scenes are improved and the explosion on the end seemed pretty good.

i was kinda hoping to get to see more but to bad, hopefully the end product will be good :)

PubicTears responds:

Oh it will be good ;)

[Broly rampage(incomplete)]

mmm

mmm well the sounds are not so good sometimes, like doesn't one scream every time he gets hit (unless in the lungs rendering someone speechless) next to that it needs more realism, i never seen anyone in dragonball z power up right after being hit with 2 blasts. without showing some damage first.

last of all it needs speed. each time he hits him away he should go a bit faster then the last time, and it needs more speed in general...
and if u got al that covered u could start thinking of gravity, they might be able to fly but if u go one away after a time the speed takes down and he starts to be the subject of gravity, so in stead of using straight tweens use guides to let them fly with a curve.

hope this helps

SSJDarkFlare responds:

Lol you watch alvin earthworm alot dont you? every word you just said is a scene from his movies lol, i love his movies, but i have my style, he has his. thanks for the comment.

[The Drunken Spartan]

nice

i got a bit bored nearing the end but this realy made me smile, and that doesn't happen much, the intro newgrounds was pretty cool 2 :)

Sh0T-D0wN responds:

:)

I know what you mean, I rarely get anything past a smile now a-days as well.

[Chalk Adventure]

chalk norris

pretty decent, i never did anything like this but i'm pretty sure it's harder than it looks, seeing as u can't undo what u change

i suggest doing something more action packed that would make it more amazing :)
still pretty good movie

Graeme responds:

I did attempt some more actiony type things.
The problem with that, is there is no Ctrl+Z. Whenever I made a mistake, it ruined it all.
So it was easier to stick to simpiler motions

[WTF Man]

ok then

mmm havn't seen ur other blammed flashes but i geuss u just need to remove that weird guy, i don't know what u are thinking , but if u replace that guy with a normal drawn and animated character, it would have more chance of survival,

Mantinziza responds:

maybe its a good thing you didnt those were horrid took 1 hour to finish Peices of shit, Thanks my animation skill need to be improves and outlining pictures doesnt do that,

seriusly thanks for the help thanks man.

[Cloverfield]

haha :)

pretty funny :)

Sh0T-D0wN responds:

:).

[Why are you doing this?]

cool

that was pretty cool :)
weird but cool
only the sound needs some improving sometimes it was to soft to hear but if i turn up the volume other times it got to loud :p but for the rest it was fun to watch :)

kojay responds:

whose leg you gotta hump to get better audio

[The One Layer Collab]

whoohoo

looks fantastic :) lol the secret part.

MarcyVF responds:

Thanks, dude. I saw a reviewer who LOVED your part!

.M.