a trailer is suppost to warm people to the fact that something great is coming, making them add u as favorites so they don't miss it.
this trailer doesn't do that, it just shows two stick figures standing, being badly drawn, not even a clue about a castle.
so here are a few tips.
- add awesome graphics in your trailer and let that be at least the minimum quality the full picture contains.
- add actionpacked animation of good quality that leaves the watcher craving for more.
- vind a voice-actor with a mature/sexy voice to do the talking.
- get a better microphone, because it was maybe the music but heard "thunder" on the background.
- add a hint of story to your trailer.
hope this helps
the filesize had me woried but it was very good :)
keep up the good work
U have already submitted this video, i don't see the difirence, at least the other one had a preloader, it was playable, just a litle hard to press play, no reason to resubmit it, or u should have waited for it to get trough and then adjusted it... as u can clearly read after it coming trough u will see that i offered my help to fix the preloader,
Why did u make the game if u think it is stupid?
Anyways a maze game can be made interesting if u use puzzles or moving parts and stuff. and even a game like maze could be really cool if u had awesome graphics, that people would play it to see the graphics,
U also should create (or ask for) some piece of code that blocks right mouse clicking.
well nice piece of work but i don't really understand the auto adjust button. if i don't mark it and move the speed i adjusts itself anyway, don't know if that is suppost to happen. and when it is marked and i move stuff it doesn't auto adjust ...
might need to work on that
Cheers mate. Auto-adjust rearranges the pieces once the kaleidoscope completes a full rotation so that you keep getting different patterns.
well not a bad game for a practice run, i didn't play trough to see the ting on the end, but it's probably a song or video,
it loas before the preloader so it has to be one of them, go to the properties or linkage of the file (the 8mb one) and uncheck export in first frame, this should make your preloader work properly (i had this problem to with my first game).
hope it works , and hope it helps,
(u can test it in flash by pressing ctrl enter 2 times or press it one time and then do simulate download in the viewing window) let me know if it worked,
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