Score: 1

"not so great"

submission: MattMan the Coolest

date: February 7, 2008

arts are crappy and i don't know what the hell is going on... randomness was good though.

here some tips:

use better graphics,
use a distinctive storyline
use sounds
use a background

hope this helps

Score: 5

"mmm"

submission: Raining Ash Trailer

date: February 7, 2008

nothing new was added from the last version i saw but the scenes are improved and the explosion on the end seemed pretty good.

i was kinda hoping to get to see more but to bad, hopefully the end product will be good :)

Score: 2

"ok then"

submission: Madness Scene Creator V.1

date: February 5, 2008

mmm excact the same name as a other one that got posted today.
this one looks better.
still i don't support the fact that stealing sprites and just putting them up there with codes is right...
here are some tips u need to improve. well bugs actually,
the head with the smile and the eyes isn't grabbable,
and the first 3 or 4 upper guns aren't either+ 1 on the second row.
i haven't checked all of them...

hope this helps, and inspires u to make something original.
this would get 6 stars more if it had been original designed art

Score: 8

"corrupted"

submission: Valhalla Knights 2

date: February 5, 2008

well i think your not the only one.
it stopped at the eye patch guy standing on his hand...
right clicking says movie not loaded.
i hope it will get fixt :) i wanna see the end,
this is a great movie...
only one thing that kinda bugged me and that was the knee of the girl on the bridge, it looked kinda squarish... for the rest no complaints

Score: 5

"mmm"

submission: Broly rampage(incomplete)

date: February 5, 2008

mmm well the sounds are not so good sometimes, like doesn't one scream every time he gets hit (unless in the lungs rendering someone speechless) next to that it needs more realism, i never seen anyone in dragonball z power up right after being hit with 2 blasts. without showing some damage first.

last of all it needs speed. each time he hits him away he should go a bit faster then the last time, and it needs more speed in general...
and if u got al that covered u could start thinking of gravity, they might be able to fly but if u go one away after a time the speed takes down and he starts to be the subject of gravity, so in stead of using straight tweens use guides to let them fly with a curve.

hope this helps

Score: 6

"mmm"

submission: A big tutorial V9

date: February 2, 2008

well i like that u have multiple stuff in it is easy to acces but the point of a tutorial is to learn something, so i suggest focussing on one code, (make multiple tutorials) and actually explain what specific parts of the code do so that people understand what they are working with and can combine stuff out of your tutorials to make their own engines and stuff, that way people will have more unique games in stead of shameless ripoffs

hope this helped

Score: 4

"mmm"

submission: A.D.V.E.N.T.U.R.E. demo

date: February 2, 2008

needs lots of work.

u need to use a boolean to make it so that if u jump u can't jump again... now u can keep on jumping in air.
and jumping and walking doesn't realy do it either.
really needs some coding improvement.

hope this helps

Score: 9

"nice"

submission: The Drunken Spartan

date: January 30, 2008

i got a bit bored nearing the end but this realy made me smile, and that doesn't happen much, the intro newgrounds was pretty cool 2 :)

Score: 6

"nice"

submission: TISFAT A4 - "2008 Collab"

date: January 29, 2008

cool but euhm... did u forget co-author? or are u just a greedy prick that doen't like to share? i hope u just forgot, would be very mean to not co-author people in a collab

still a briljiant piece of work

Score: 4

"lol"

submission: Manhole

date: January 27, 2008

the idea is pretty good but i think the gameplay lacks,
it seems like the guys aren't timed so sometimes they both want to go across togethere always making someone die... so that needs work.